this poem is just to appreciate my life as a student:)


I'm a student!


I'm a student

my twelveth year

there are many people who wish

they could again be one

but i can be a student

& my life goes on

yet I can enjoy sitting on the bench

under a tree

talking to friends,

a group of three.

In the class:

making noises !

how i enjoy it

when the teacher says"quiete".

studing together:

in the school library

bell rings, back to the class

Oh, class discussions!

I feel the seconds pass

again we hear the bell rings

"time to go home" a friend says!

but my heart's left there among those books

in the bookcases

in our library

at school....

I wish I could remain forever a student

sitting at the desk

there... in the class

I appreciate these seconds pass

well still I'm a student :)



Poetry by sabereh lotfian
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Written on 2006-11-09 at 11:20

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Nancy Sikora
This poem brought back the feeling of being in school, the way I feel it in my dreams.
2011-01-06


Achernar
Oh, this is a most marvelous and highly nostalgic write, and I really did love it! (your very excellent poem is, however, in desperate need of spellcheck!) again, a fine write!!
2009-08-03


NicholasG
I think you will be a student forever. Your "school" will change but you will always be learning. You have the seeds of wisdom in you, seen in your writings. Be kind to your gift and feed it and you will always gather wisdom.
Nick
2009-05-27


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
I've read a few of your poems and have concluded that you
are a very special and rare person...

Re this poem, KJC has said it all......

Thanks

Stan
2007-10-09


Amanda K
Dear,
I loved so much your poem. School days are always treasured and friend we make at school are the most trustworthy and loveable. for they loved us mostly for who we are. later as one moves from that academic world to real world of business and finance few friends are found and usually relations end the moment you leave the place. thank you for writing about the school .
2006-11-28