This is a repost..I just really liked writing this, and was thinking about the ocean tonight, and looking at pictures of interesting sea creatures!


The Ocean

I long for the sea to nip at my feet

to wrap me up in it's cool arms

I feel these ancient memories,

tearing at my core

I long to near the water

evermore

I long for the place

where the

winds and the tide tear at the shore

but in the twilight of my dreams...

the fire rages on





Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-11-16 at 10:28

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D.D. Michaels
Superb poem, Teala. I also love the ocean, so I was particularily touched by your liquid lyrics. Great write.

D.D. Michaels
2007-01-17


munir mezyed
ur poem as wild as an ocean... I love the sound of water " the murmur" this is what I felt – hearing the murmur of water and the waves dashing to the shore while reading ur poem.

Big hugs
munir mezyed
2006-12-21


salem
yes i like it
and i like yr way more
thanx
2006-12-09


Amanda K
we all do wish to be in such a haven. you took me far .hopefully in my honey moon i will visit that place.

all the best,
2006-11-22


BlueyedSoul
I too love the ocean, I love the appeal it has on the senses. A beautiful piece you have here Teala. Thank you for reposting for more of us to enjoy.
~Blue
2006-11-22


Mukul Dahal
This is a superb write.
2006-11-18


Kathy Lockhart
Oh Teala, this is a wonderous beauty. I am so glad you are posting again fellow hoosier. : )
2006-11-17


keith nunes
nice to see you back again! great piece this. well done
2006-11-17