it rained on tuesday, and my friends left me today (friday).


"storm"

it rained this morning
and in between
the thunder claps --

i blinked.



Poetry by Zachary P. B.
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Written on 2006-11-18 at 05:37

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betsy Firefly
This tells me that you barely took notice of the storm outside, nor your friends leaving...
2007-01-06


kladdpapper
rain, tears - painful but somehow pure and therefore beautiful.
I'm sorry they had to leave.. you can still meet them again, though, and that's always something.

great poem z.
2006-11-19


Arti
Did you have cheerios for b'fast, by any chance?

You blinked between thunderclaps... how about getting under the bed with me? :p
2006-11-18