This set of haiku and renga are a collaboration between my self and a very gifted young lady who writes very sensitive Haikus. It was a delightful experience and proves what the cooperation of virtual strangers can achieve


Haikus With A stranger a co write between Liliana Cucu and M.A.Meddings

Tonight autumn dies,
veiled in a white cerement
by her cold sister...

And the torpid season chills
The skin and cuts to the bone

Could anyone bring
back to life the warmth and joy
of the summer sun?...

Inspired by Springtime I will
Bring thee warmth and  enjoyment

Blessed be thy gifts, for
filling my heart with so much
light and happiness!...

Gifts  beget  the inner me
The essential  joy I find

And the sun rises
upon this humble servant
of the word today

It will set when angry words
are used to destroy truth





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2006-11-26 at 21:11

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Lourdes
beautiful this is , just beautiful .
Bravos to both poets !
2006-11-27



A beautiful co-write, very well blended!
2006-11-26


Kathy Lockhart
This is a great collaboration. The words are tender and the feel is gentle.
2006-11-26


Liza Daquini
I particularly love the end! Beautiful!You didn't even have to use your watercolours to paint a vivid picture this time!
2006-11-26


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Just wonderful and so thought provoking. A beautiful picture.
2006-11-26