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Will I save me now?

And
I almost tasted
bloud
on the tip of my tongue
again

They say
that
it tastes like
metal

I guess
they don't really know
why

I wonder
if I try to make
things worse

try to
punish
for making progress

today
I reached out

everybody listened
and accepted
me

I cannot begin
to describe
how amazed I am,

I mean,
why would they?

Deep breath,

will I save me
will I save me now?



Poetry by kristallkross
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Written on 2006-12-01 at 09:43

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lynne cannon
sad poem with a lot of meaning,i liked it,because it was said from the heart
2006-12-01


Zoya Zaidi
There is much more to this poem then meets the eye!
It is a very deep poem!
I think you will save youself, dear kristallkross!
(((Hugs)))
Welcome to the bay from my side!
Love, Zoya
2006-12-01