love is like

to learn to speak a new language
but opposite..

it is hard to learn a new language
too easy to forget if you don't speak much

love is too easy too..
but too hard to forget.



Poetry by Miro
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Written on 2006-12-10 at 23:33

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Zoya Zaidi
Hey Miro, I like the analogy!
Yeah, love is exactly like that...
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya

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2006-12-11



We want to forget the pain of losing love for sure miro, but never the feeling of being in or holding love that feeling of an open heart will bring more love our way. I see this is in the pool, so a crit is in order, so I have given it a little edit for you.

love is like

to learn to speak a new language
but opposite..

it is hard to learn a new language
too easy to forget if you don't speak much

love is too easy too
but too hard to forget.

I hope that is ok for you, but it is your poem and you should write it the way you want, but I know the language can cause frustration.

Smiling at you, Tai

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2006-12-10