Theme A poetic love song
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kip41 years old from Kenya
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...i once watched a candle burn, the bare flame consuming the wick and melting the wax and this is the thought that came to me..."Love is like a fire, you can't tame it"...
...Burning Love...
I watch the candle flame burn
And the wax as it melts down
The wick entwined in the flame
A fire that no one can tame,
Some floating, some dripping
All liquid but only for some time,
It only takes a moment to break
And another to mend,
It only takes a moment to wake
To realise your heart has an ache,
Just as the flame is alit
And one blow puts it off
So is love in the heart not just a bit
And a simple response determines a lot
Poetry By kip
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Written 2006-01-30 11:33
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sania
what an imagination do you have, it is a novel idea to compare love with the candle. v. nice. a must read!
2006-10-20
liz munro 
I never though of love like this.
nice write.
2006-01-31
Wretling
" To realise your heart has an ache "
True words
2006-01-30
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