December dawn




as I looked back

the moon lay broken on the pavement

the stars had become berries on the hedges

the rainbow was melting into brownish puddles

and clouds were flaking from my boots




Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-12-13 at 12:17

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Forest
Its like disappointment blended with magic. You are so good, but then..who am I to say it to you?
Forest
2007-04-03


Zainab
Merry Christmas ^^
2006-12-27



On a december dawn, Our Lady of Lourdes appeared to me. Clouds were flaking from her boots and on her head she wore a crown of twelve stars...
2006-12-13


Kathy Lockhart
you are amazing. This is beautiful. Those metaphorical images are vivid!! mother k
2006-12-13


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this is beautiful and well worth a 10 rate rgds mike
2006-12-13


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Where do you get such wonderful imagery rgds mike
2006-12-13