Fiction, but of course:)


The Memory Remains

I have burnt your pictures
Burnt your letters
But I cannot seem
To burn you from my memory

Rising like a Phoneix
From the ashes of
You

Yet..
The memory remains
Forever imprinted on
My soul

You invade my dreams
Invading my demenour
I push you away
And yet..

The memory remains



Poetry by Teala
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Written on 2006-12-18 at 03:43

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Brendan Finbarr Tully
''Rising like a Phoneix
From the ashes of you''

Just loved that line, would that I could emulate you in so much, Brendan.
2007-01-08


munir mezyed
I have a poem similar to it ..it is called NAY...I will post it some day and allow u to read it...any way..ur poem is Very romantic in away but at the same time full of emotion and love...But the question will always remain, are we able to delete the memories out of our mind?
2006-12-18


penfold18
Memories can be so hard to erase and you have conveyed this message so well in this poem.
2006-12-18


salem
it's nice poem
yes The memory remains
good done
thanx
2006-12-18


Kathy Lockhart
how does one erase memories. I wish I knew. There's a few I would like to burn and then bury the ashes. Nicely done Teala
2006-12-18


Janine>K
I also wish it was easier erasing someone/something from a memory (that seems to last forever), I just wish I always had the words to expressed it... Now I know why I didn't because I would not have been able to do it as well as you... Great Job Teala, hope you loose the memory
2006-12-18


Rob Graber
Memories rising Phoenix-like from the ashes of the remembered: great image, Teala!
2006-12-18