Just the faith in God.


Bliss


Forgive me for doubting that
You write signs in sand.
My breasts are too narrow,
and my strength is nothing.
Behind hopelessness and nonsense,
I always hear harmony,
I hear Your words,
and see Your paintings
of tender forms, and
lengthened lines, with
expressed sexuality.

It is the same bowl, and
the hand is the same,
and the mouthful, and
the taste. Only the moment
is different.



Poetry by Dejan
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Written on 2006-12-18 at 10:59

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sabereh lotfian
Hey , that was *If* not *even*
by mistake! LOL

Sabereh
2007-01-17


sabereh lotfian
Ooops! hey! :-p this was so deep that I'm not sure even I got the message or not. but besides I really like the end. you have the power to end your poems with a harmony of words:)

Regards
Sabereh
2007-01-17


betsy
In this beautiful poem I would change one out of two things, Dejan: either the capital letter on Your ( for that would mean you are referring to a higher being,such as God) which I think I'd prefer to read here OR keep those vapitals and change the word sexuality e.g. beauty, grace, loveliness.

I liked this poem. It felt good to read.

betsy
2006-12-19


binesh
such sensitive lines and they have got surprising depths one can feel
2006-12-18