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Young sprouts


In the wind, tall trees sway,

and the young sprouts

tremble.



Haiku by Dejan
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Written on 2007-01-17 at 14:07

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Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
And when the wind dies down, the young sprouts
all give a sigh of relief and in time grow into
sturdy tall trees...

Interesting poem

Stan
2010-10-17


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Should I have read between the lines , so much side hear . Enjoyed reading and thinking as I read. Will be thinking more and more as I read more that lays written in invisible thought , in my thoughts to come , those that are not alredy hear in my mind.
Ken
2010-03-09


kayce
Nice piece,am sure it has another meaning hidden beneath the lines.
2008-12-11


Kathy Lockhart
i love the movement in this. The soft and gentle feel is soothing.
2007-01-18


sabereh lotfian
Trees sway, young sprouts tremble so beautiful but one more thing is left!
The ROOTS stand firm ,always!
Thanks for sharing this one:)

Sabereh
2007-01-17