How many of us really do communicate or say anything with our words?


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When we talk, do we really say
What's on our heart? Do we convey
A message to the one beside us?
Or do our words just help to hide us?


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Lorsqu'on parle, est-ce qu'on dit quelque chose?
Des mots du coeur? Est-ce que tu supposes?
Que tes mots soient compris de l'homme à  c'té -
Ou est-ce qu'ils juste servent à te cacher?



Poetry by betsy Firefly
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Written on 2006-12-30 at 22:23

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
bonne question... j'imagine que ça dépend du contexte et qui se trouve à nos côtés dans le moment... en tout cas pour moi c'est comme ça... si j'suis bien à l'aise, je communique sans compromis... sinon, j'avoue que j'me cache de quelque façon... j'crois bien que nous le faisons tous... réellement aimé le contenu du texte et la manière qu'il est présenté dans les deux langues... :f xx
2007-01-14


Amanda K
yeah,true dear. some talk or speak but who really uses words to communciate or express his/her thoughts in a meaningful way. well-written.

all the best,
2007-01-07



A good question, and a well posed one!

Then, there is another side of it: sometimes, our words can reveal much more than what we intended:

And if we think we can disguise
the meaning of our heart in words obscure,
can we then be completely sure
our secret is concealed from people's eyes?

Welcome on the bay, Betsy!
2007-01-04


Rob Graber
The title is better in French, but I get a kick our of your rhymes in English--lines 3 & 4 especially. As a beginning student of French, I really enjoyed this!
2006-12-30