Inspired by Rob's "Two tendencies"


Two Paths

There lie two paths ahead of me
one seems just right -
the one for me;

King Solomon said,"Destruction, friend!"

I turned, took God's Path in the end

There lies one path ahead of me
on it I see naught or dimly
but it IS right for me



Poetry by betsy Firefly
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Written on 2007-01-01 at 19:13

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Individuality
i think we all have choice, what is right for one may not be for another, but no matter, all roads lead home. a good poem.
2007-03-08


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
this makes me think of decisions we are faced with at times through life... sometimes we don't have the answers or we don't really know what compells, but the feeling says that's the way that needs to be followed... this one is thought-provoking for me... i really enjoy these types of writes... :f xx
2007-01-14


wee2souls
beautiful write:)
hugs to you
cindy
2007-01-07


Amanda K
you write poems with deep feelings wich makes your writing distinguished.

all the best,
2007-01-06


Rob Graber
This little poem builds quickly to a wonderful conclusion!
2007-01-01