Walking a path of faith is certainly not an easy one.


Tried, but real

faith it is not
until it is tried
I almost forgot
the path is not wide




Poetry by betsy Firefly
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Written on 2007-01-01 at 20:57

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Rob Taylor
that work shows how hard it is to keep believing in anything without wandering off....very good piece
2007-01-19


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
"i almost forgot the path is not wide" - i really like that... makes me think of misunderstandings and heads butting that sometimes come to be between different opinions... some go overboard or are simply closed-minded to differences of views... but on a personal level when we walk a path of faith, we do have times we come to question our very own decision to follow that path when everything else seems to contradict it at times... well, these are the thoughts that come to my mind, sorry if it's nowhere near what you intended with your words... but i really enjoyed this 'cause it got my thoughts going again... you write well, evoking emotions and thoughts for me as a reader, and other readers as well i'm sure... :f xx
2007-01-14


Amanda K
well-said.

all the best on 2007,
2007-01-06