Black Silence

Black Silence,

The swish of rose petals,
Amber firedrops, twinkles flowing upon cement,
A cirlce of chairs, empty, waiting,
The slow rumble of hearts as music soars,
The gentle tears gliding on warm cheeks,

Black Silence,

Standard raised heavenward,
An embrace, a kiss, whispered words,
The white rose adorning the green book,
The last words caress the Letters,
Martyrs in life, martyrs in death,

Black Silence.



Poetry by Jon Aflatooni
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Written on 2007-01-02 at 00:20

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Janine>K
This is sizzling... very deep very potent... loved reading it
2007-01-02


Tal¿a
Nice. Good vibe. Well, bad vibe, but you wrote it well and made it portray the right vibe, so it's good. Well it makes sense in my head, anyway. Even if not yours.
~Talia

Language: 4
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-01-02