When i was at the point of insanity. I sung this song out. Please comment


The Suicide Song

Look in a mirror
And what do you find
You're brushing your hair
Twenty thousand times

And in the mirror
All that they can see
Imperfection turning your blind
Leading you to your perfect suicide

You pick up your blade
And what do you see
A tortured soul
That's meant to be freed

You got to run away, darling
You got to pick up your feet and go
You got to escape this haunting
You got to realize and know

What your about to do
It will be a horrible site
And you know it is true
So get up and get ready to fight

And when you're blind
And you're point-blank to the gun
Just remember this isn't for fun

So turn and try to find the light
Or they will find you
And kill you tonight

Try to escape the grip of your blade
And everything will begin to façade
Or your mind will override
Leaving you to your perfect suicide




Poetry by Angel D.
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Written on 2007-01-09 at 00:16

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omg. i think i got the shivers reading it also. but man did you do a damn good job. loved it.
2007-01-10


Janine>K
This gave me the shivers, but still a first-class and deep poem. Great work...
2007-01-09