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Desperation:

I look up into the sky to find myself another shooting star
and Everything is up for the gamble tonight
But not even a wish could undo the pain and heartache
And not even enough tears can heal the wound

I could taste your lips
And speak my passions through my tongue
But you still wouldn't be able to hear me
Every moment you reach my heart in my chest
I curse myself for each second I fall deeper

I'm in love with your taste, your touch, your eyes and your voice
Time is ticking down and I know its too late to turn back
Fire burns our heat into embers
My cries are consumed into the dead of night

And once again I look up into the sky to find myself another shooting star
But I know no matter how many times I try
I know my wishes will never come true
My emotions bleed out of me like a slit on my wrist
There will never be enough for you to feel how I feel

I won't be able to ever to confess
My words will never betray me
As it seems my body shutters the truths
The unspoken messages of I love you's




Poetry by Angel D.
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Written on 2009-09-16 at 09:17

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