Written for a friend going through some hard times.


Darkened Soul

Let the light peak in

Then lighting your darkened soul

Go and find your peace



Haiku by Teala
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Written on 2007-01-09 at 01:24

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
lovely and warm thoughts/wishes for a friend you care a lot about... this is heart lightening and sweet... very nice.. thanks for sharing :f *hug* xx
2007-02-15


wee2souls
A BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY SHORT AND SO TO
THE POINT IN WHAT YOU WRITE,AS THE LIGHT OF DAY
WILL RISE TO A NEW DAWN IN ONES SORROW
LOVELY WRITE:))
CINDY
2007-01-10


Will
Special Piece...
2007-01-09


Arti
I take hope, Teala. Printed and pinned in that book of special verse.
2007-01-09


Janine>K
You're a real pillar of strength and a good friend, I find your poem encouraging and intriguing.. so little words can say so much!! Good work
2007-01-09


Rob Graber
A llovely touch, Teala. I like especially the last line, which beautifully acknowledges the individuality of experience.
2007-01-09


Kathy Lockhart
yes...the light does bring peace; its just that shadows keep getting in the way. Well written piece Teala.
2007-01-09


Zachary P. B.
soothing. hope the friend does better.

z.
2007-01-09


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
A beautiful write for your friend.

You have a heart of gold Teala.

Liz
2007-01-09