This is my very first complete poem. I found it with all my old poetry and want you all to read it. It may be nothing much but I'd like for you all to comment it please and thank you.


Paradise

We all die for a paradise. One actual day the earth will be crying. Then it will all fade away. Every hope, dream, and thought would be to find that paradise. But when you find that paradise you'll be alone. You'll be crying for more and what you get is nothingness it's all the same. To be I have no paradise. I guess everything was meant to be. I guess everything was planed to happen next. The paradise I would be wanting would never come. Because, I only need someone to love there's no need for a paradise. So this paradise I called fro will never come to me. But, if I really found a paradise does that mean I'm alone. Does that mean I didn't find anyone? But, if I really found a paradise does that mean I'm alone? Does that mean I didn't find anyone? But to me a paradise is some to love. But what does a paradise really mean in the first place?
Can it be anything can it or can it not. This paradise is so surprising it's so mysterious. Do you wonder does it have a beginning or an end this world of paradise?




Poetry by Angel D.
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Written on 2007-01-11 at 23:11

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omg... for your first poem that is really good. my probably sucked.... a lot. and see, i told you i would read it. :P
2007-01-14