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Can't Find The Right Words To Say

Locked within my head
Words expressing feelings swirl around
but out of my head, on paper
I just can't get them in the right words down.

With a bridge created
A distance closes
Love, new life living felt within my very soul
My head also knows it's true, there's no if's, but's or suppose's

You are my guiding light
Our love soars everyday to a new height
Keeping each safe from harms sight
No-one can tear us apart, with tooth and nail for us we'll fight.

In my head, words expressing feelings swirl around
There is still so much I want to say
I can't get them down on paper in the right words
But you bring the sun back to each day.

.......Thank you for new hopes and dreams.


12/01/07



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-13 at 00:59

Tags Happiness  Love 

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salem
wow, I really liked this one
You have an obvious talent
Great job
thanx

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wee2souls
you write with such heart and soul..you do!!
these lines::

But you bring the sun back to each day.

really brings warmth in those few words
gives alot it does!!
gifted you are
hugs to you,,choochoo lol
cindymac

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Mitzi
Great poem liz!!!! keep up the wonderful work! :D

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