This is my first haiku attempt with a lot of help from Thomas. The 2nd line came from a tongued-twisted attempt with what I was trying to say =) the 1st line is Thomas's and 3rd line we came up together.

~Liz~


Not Accented English[a co-writen haiku with Thomas Perdue]

You speak a bit weird
My English is not accent
All have an accent.

14/01/07



Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-14 at 07:44

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dear liz, we all need help when starting to use a new poetic form. and for a first haiku, even if with help, this one is quite a good one :). keep writing, and try not to think about the form itself, but about concentrating in as few words as possible as much information that you can - that is the "secret" :). then the form will come itself to light.
Lilly xxx
2007-01-14