I finally wrote my first haiku a co-write with Thomas. This is inspired by that and is my 2nd haiku. Thank you for helping me with the syllable count =) Please take literally =))

~liz~


Knots and bows[my 2nd haiku]

My tongue's getting tied
up in sailor's knots and bows
where's the finishing knot?

14/01/07



Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-14 at 07:58

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Arti
Way to go, Liz. Counting syllables still has me in knots and tearing my hair out, but the number of syllable-counted writes I've done is no measure of the thickness of my hair... ;p
2007-01-14



this one is even better:) good work:)
Lilly xxx
2007-01-14