I wrote the haiku which Thomas has answered as a renka.


A Liz-Thomas Perdue Tanka

Understanding Love
How do you explain this new
found joy to others.

I would explain it as an
Aching in my heart no more...

15/01/07



Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-15 at 02:44

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Teala
So very true! Love does heal an empty heart..bravo!
2007-01-16


Kathy Lockhart
it is just right. perfect in my eyes. love it.
2007-01-15


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Thomas this is such a beautiful form and perfect fit to your love rgds mike
2007-01-15



Interesting...fits together so well. Frankly, it's beautiful.

~Kiva
2007-01-15