Thank you everyone....our challenge is still open but so as it doesn't get confusing for people we have posted what we hace so far =) Please add your haiku/renga's as comments so it is less confusing to collate.
~liz~



Liz-Thomas Haiku-Renga Challenge so Far

Understanding Love
How do you explain this new
found joy to others

I would explain it as an
Aching in my heart no more...

Languishing heartbeats
In a love embrace. Please feel
The rhythm. It's nice...

rhythm swirling to heart's song
two lovers dancing embrace.....

Life in your absence
Is darkening of the sun
In twilights sadness

When you are here, my heart is
No more in such dreadful pain...

when you are not here
my soul is empty and my
whole life is shorter...

calls from your lips for my soul
awake me from the dark night

your voice drops honey
when you call me in the night...
how could i not come?

I'm drawn to you like the bee....
your love's so sweet within me

Like a mist I rise
spreading out over your love
damp with dew's moisture

I breath in the mist of your
love, and warm it with my blood

Love is a poison
That whoever drinks regrets; and
Who does not- regrets!

let me bless my soul with the
elixir from your sweet soul!

the mere thought of her
sends tingles through my body
orgasmic delight

Is this bliss so very real?
I can feel your presence here...

kisses on your lips,
tangible, you are still here.
this bliss is quite real.

The sweet nothings in your ear
Compliment the moon set sky




Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-16 at 01:51

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Amanda K
you did well. it was a good shot. how you decribed love with such special images. well-done.
2007-01-17