I have been toying with the idea of using certain ocean
metaphors in a love poem but struggled with the form.
The renga is meant to represent how beauty is within a person.

~Liz~


OCEANS OF LOVE[TANKA]


The Dolphin would fight
All the sharks in the ocean
For his one true love..

...The pearl of his true love shines
brighter then it's Oyster home.

18/01/07



Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-18 at 00:58

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This is purely wavy with feeling, and as beautiful as a peral. Wonderful work.

~Kiva
2007-01-18


Teala
Fantastic! I love anything to do with the ocean--and using the dolphins in this one was great! Excellent, beautiful job!
2007-01-18