It was raining one day; felt like writing about it.


Rainy Day


It's raining today.
It's been raining all day.
A foreshadowing of what's going to happen the rest of the day.
Nothing good comes out of the rain other than its end.
Yearning to see the sun again
Some light that could shine on my body,
But never in my soul.
Puddles of anguish everywhere from the sky's tears.
But I secretly like it when it's here
I'm used to its darkness, its shadow from light,
its mood...depression at its height.
I connect with it all too well.



Poetry by Barry
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Written on 2007-01-20 at 21:14

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Zainab
Very nice poem about rain!
I love rain too
But sometimes I hate

You know why
If I'm out
And I realize
I forgot my umbrella
And it's raining
Waiting 4 the bus not yet!
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Welcome to poetbay!
2007-01-21


Zoya Zaidi
"Puddles of anguish everywhere from the sky's tears. "
How yrical are these lines!
I like the way you turn the mood of the poem and steer it to describe your own gloomy thoughts...
I look at rain in a very romantic way, but then it depends again on your mood...
Read my poem, if you like: ' Sometimes I feel I am the Rain...'- Would to have your comment

Welcome to the Bay Barry!

Love, Zoya
2007-01-20