RELEASE.

Locked and lost in past events
That drag me through the mire
Most, which now make little sense
To quench the inner fire

These passageways within my mind
That twist and turn throughout
Seek response within my soul
The want to scream and shout

That dark place deep within me
Can only struggle for the light
Kept shackled to emotions
Now well hidden, from others sight

No doubt one day, i'll find that peace
The solace that i seek
Until that time, i'll sip sweet wine
And lose myself in sleep.



Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2005-10-24 at 18:08

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Teala
wow---keep looking for that peace M'dear!
2005-10-25


Zoya Zaidi
"These passage ways within my mind
That twist and turn through out
Seek response within, my soul
They want to scream and shout"

What a perfect stenza!!!

Strangely enough I have used the same words: "Quench", " fire","QUAGMIRE"... all in a single poem of mine( of course in a different context- it is about a street urchin)...

An absolute winner of a poem

Three Cheers for you Penfold!!!
2005-10-24


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
the want - they want
others sight - other's sight

could do with some wine right now, but i have been off the drink for a fair few months.

our past - creates us in the here and now.
2005-10-24