Add one syllable on every line. Am I telling myself this? I guess so, I've been too busy to even read poetry as D-day draws closer.


Awaken your Senses

Breathe
slowly.
Watch the rain
gently stroll down
the clean windowpane.
Feel the delight of freshly
washed grass rub against your knee.
Taste the moment of solitude
Life has offered you today. Listen
to the calm music of your heart as it
sets your feet tapping to its jazzy rhythm.
Live for yourself just now, this spell will not last long.





Poetry by Arti
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Written on 2007-01-29 at 15:47

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Zachary P. B.
i can imagine this... i like it, arti, i like it a lot.

hope all is well where you are.
z.
2007-01-29


Zoya Zaidi
I hope the spell never breaks!
All the best for your exams, dear One.
I am sure you willl 'pass' with flying colours!
(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-01-29