Haiku


Boiling Anger

Anger held in check
until boiling simmers down
brews a smart remark



Haiku by Phyllis J. Rhodes
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Written on 2007-01-30 at 06:40

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Jessica Rexroat
You've done this Haiku well. You do master those smart remarks, I know.
2007-02-10


Ropawil
It is only my opinion .
I don't feel it's finished.
Somewhere there's more, a closure.
Luv it luv it.
2007-02-01


Kathy Lockhart
i see the steam coming off those words. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr! When my sister gets mad, WATCH OUT!!
little verse---big roar!
2007-01-30


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
this is a brilliant haiku and I can feel the seething beneath these words
but why are you angry not those hens again?

well done Pyllis
rgds mike
2007-01-30