An acrostic about a technique lovers use with ill concealed guile


Coup De Grace by M.A.Meddings

Slowly and surreptitiously you lead me to heaven
Even in your gentleness you took me there
Daring to smile  with your beautiful eyes
Using all  of your radiance and to my surprise
Carefully with ill concealed guile winning me
Taking me unto your heart so completely
Intuitively gaining control of my senses
Only delivering the Coup De Grace at the last
Nonchelantly causing me to love thee



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Written on 2007-02-01 at 13:54

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BlueyedSoul
I once again am undone by the power of your words, the beauty of your heart and the grace of your style. Michael...incredibly, you get better with each piece. Amazing.
~blue
2007-02-02


Kathy Lockhart
this is so soft and gentle in its sensuality. Its flow is smooth and warm like a cup of hot cocoa. I want to wrap myself up in it and enjoy the flavor. Beautiful.
2007-02-01


josephus The PoetBay support member heart!
There is an Elizabethan quality to this. An elegance. There is also a touch of the Dumas in there as well. For me, that recipe adds up to a very enjoyable read.
2007-02-01



this technique is only succesfull when the feeling is shared:) but the poem is delightful, as always, Michael:)
Lilly xxxx
2007-02-01