A cheeky rhyming tanka for Valentines day


Buttons by M.A.Meddings

Buttons on dresses
Just made for the undoing
Of romantic men 
Bra fasten clasps cause few gasps
When  Unfastened  again





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Written on 2007-02-12 at 14:00

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cute one:D:D:D and very fit for valentines day, especially if you add to those buttons a romantic environment...some perfumed candles...a good wine...omg, i'm daydreaming:)))))))
Lilly xxx
2007-02-13


kath
Well, well this sure is cheeky .. but nice and sweet ;)

rgds, katherine
2007-02-12


Phyllis J. Rhodes
Buttons and bras for Valentines Day huh? You must be talking about what women should give men. Because this isn't what women want for Valentines Day dear. We want chocolate and wine. We want a day at the spa and an evening with fine dining and slow dancing and flowers and sweet things said. THEN, you can have what you want, the buttons and bra clasps, meanwhile we'll have another truffle.
2007-02-12


Kathy Lockhart
oh those buttons and clasps. It takes time to unwrap some very precious packages. Patience and persistance will advance the cause. Your poetry sure has a way of getting my attention. : )
2007-02-12


kid
this is a suitable tanka for the valantine's season
"Bra fasten clasps cause few gasps
When Unfastened again"
Wow i hope it is not what i think
2007-02-12



I bet you are an expert Mike? lol
Happiness is a Man with clasps in fingers for sure.
personally mine stand alone! lol

Just clicking the fingers does the trick nicely!rofl

Grinning at you pert...Tai
2007-02-12