olden memories

olden memories
linger as the great orb fades,
before lovers eyes




Haiku by Ernesto P. Santiago
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Written on 2007-02-22 at 20:34

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Amanda K
a very good description of old memories
2007-03-12


Individuality
lovers' eyes, as i am assuming you are meaning more than one lover. eyes are belonging to lovers so an apostrophe :) if a single lover it would be lover's eyes. sorry, i am a geek for grammar at times :D
2007-02-22



Elegant and delicate!
2007-02-22