This is a little poem that was inspired by a beautiful pair of eyes that gave me a thrill and it felt like an electric shock.


It Begins In The Toes by M.A.Meddings

It begins in  the  toes
Then the feeling grows
Like an electric shock
Tracking upwards
To a gentle tingling  In my chest 
Bringing a beautiful zest
To the important parts
Like the thrill from adrenalin flow
your eyes enchant me so
As they softly and tenderly love me

 





Poetry by lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-06 at 14:50

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Karen Canning
eyes the windows to the soul and the depths of all eternity, you write a good poem

huggs
karenxx
2007-03-11


Colin Skilton
Like ice cold goose bumps all over the body!
I loved this my friend, a lovely expression of that certain electric feeling that we get when we meet that speacial person.
Colinxx
2007-03-06


kath
It is a sensation once fellt never forgotten .. it elevates you and makes you feel the wonder of love ... and yes it does start in the toes ... funny really ...

a poem filled with love .. so nicely and well written with the mark of the hero as it speaks so beautifully and tenderly of a love fellt
2007-03-06


Kathy Lockhart
it is such a wonderful feeling...the feeling of shared love. And, you have described the effects perfectly. A love like that is amazing. I am happy that you have found such a love. xxxyb
2007-03-06


Peter Humphreys The PoetBay support member heart!
It does indeed! But the eyes tell it ...
2007-03-06



All of us who have ever been in love, can surely confirm this is true, hero:
It begins in the toes!
Yes, it toes!
2007-03-06