Alive again


Alive by M,A.Meddings

I love the way you wrinkle your nose 
And I suppose the tiny dimples when you smile
How they keep me captured for awhile
As I vainly try to win you 
Not an easy thing to do given your beauty
And do you know sweet miss 
How I yearn for your tender kiss 
Upon my brow and how 
The sinews of your throat stretch and flex
When you turn your head effectively 
You surely have the winning of me 
And the gentle key to my enthrall  
How I love the flecks of white that define your hair
And baby I dont care thats how I love you 
I love  how you hide your tears 
To pretend you have no fears about my love 
For none have I my darling simply because 
I believe if  you were to leave
I wouldnt want to live without you





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Written on 2007-03-08 at 14:30

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Amanda K
wow. here micky you captured the moments that only those who trully love will describe and admire as well. the tears, her nose, white hair. the speaker's love is alive.

love, amanda
2007-03-12


kid
i swear any girl lady or damsel this poem is written to will fall for it. She will melt! yes she will. Try it.
This is a very good poem ful of assonance alliteration and ryhthm.
I respect it
2007-03-10


Zoya Zaidi
Romantic, as you always and invariably, are dear Mike!
(((hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-03-08


Lavender
Simply lovely! My account here at poetbay seems to be frozen and I cannot receive any messages or send any, even though I deleted all but three so there would be room. I like your poetry so much and wish I might post one of your love poems on the poetry blog I run for a newspaper. You can find it at blogcentral.thereporter.com/planet

We get between 300 and 850 hits a day! e-mail me? Thank you!
2007-03-08


Kathy Lockhart
To notice so many seemingly insignificant things about your lady and see them with such tenderness is certainly the result of your love for her. Would she mind if you were cloned? To be loved like this is a dream. Ahhh Love! xxxxyb
2007-03-08


Zachary P. B.
how alive you are indeed - excellent write, michael.
2007-03-08