Elusive Dream

Why can't I turn my days into a fairy tale?
Why can't I live that fairy tale the way I dream it?
Why can't that dream become a reality?
Why can't our reality be simple?
Why can't this simplicity be our way?
Why is the way long and uncertain?
Why is it that I still see your face when I close my eyes?
Why can I feel your presence in the emptiness of my bed?
Why is my bed forever cold?
Why do you hide behind that pole?
Why don't you just give in?
Why don't you just let love in?
That's what I did.



Poetry by Ali Al Saeed
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Written on 2007-03-08 at 16:52

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Zoya Zaidi
Love expression of love and passion!
Welcome to the bay Ali!
((Hugs))
Love, Zoya
2007-03-08


moon smile
sooooooooo lovely words,your emotins are describing what all of us feel ,the world of dream where you can share your love your own world away from the cold reality ,i adore the 7th line,it full of deepness and transcendental love when your love became a part of your soul.Master piece,''Monn smile''.
2007-03-08