Insipired by Thomas Perdue's poem "How will we feel"

For T :)

~l.~


That is how we will feel


You ask how we will feel
the first time we physically met.....

Like the baby bird hatching
and seeing the dawn for the first time
Awaking to the fine rays of the sun

that is how we will feel.....


Like the cleasing breath after rain
clearing the senses,
awaking refreshed and new

that is how we will feel.....

And like the spider's web
is stronger then steel
So to like that our love continues to grow

Like the spring blooming
in the departure of winter
colours shining brighter then before

that is how we will feel.....

13/03/07




Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-13 at 05:34

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Amanda K
God you are talented my firend for you are always inspired by others and come up with beautiful poems

thx and all the best

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2007-03-17


penfold18
Very descriptive in its attempt to convey to the reader the depth of feeling and in my opinion it has been achieved.

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2007-03-16


Phyllis J. Rhodes
How exciting and fresh and awesome!

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2007-03-16