A cheeky take on Josh Whites song 'Sometime'  Warning risque content


Blam To Blam by M.A.Meddings

Rhymically moving 
Just we two 
Making the slats bounce 
Wow! wee! woo! 
Begging me nicley 
Please darling do  
It to me all over again 
For the slats in the bed
Go blam to blam every morning 
The slats in the bed
Sing  their song every night  
Lets do everything
To make the rafters ring
Come on and love me
Baby just love
Come on and love me
For a lifetime

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





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Written on 2007-03-19 at 11:41

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Cheeky cheeky cheeky
but not as risque as me
For what you describe
Reminds me of what
One person only will see ;)

But you need to have more detail
And perhaps I can help there
But then again it might be best,
To ask T about such things as my underwear ;)

You have inspired this cheeky write
by your into my daydreams insight
But now you must excuse me
as in to a T cake I rhymically bite!

HEE HEE :))

L.
2007-03-21


liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I love your cheekiness :))

Have you been peeking into
my daydreams of T? ;) :))

This is so cleverly written
very funny, reminds me
of someone.....;)

BOOKMARKED.

L.
2007-03-21


Phyllis J. Rhodes
I am cracking up!!!!!!This just hit me so funny because it almost sounds like a country song. "The Slats In The Bed"
"Making the slats bounce wow, wee woo
begging me nicely, please darling do...."
I can hear Dolly Parton or George Jones or maybe
on the more contemporary scene, Alan Jackson or
Shania Twain.
2007-03-19


penfold18
Now thats what I like a poem with bounce in it.
2007-03-19


Kathy Lockhart
wow wow wow wee! what rhythm you have. : D
2007-03-19