The first poem i ever wrote. I'm talking about depression.


Bitter Cold

It's bitter cold with you around
pain and fear are what abound
I wait for hope but there's no sound
only hate can be found

Life and fun you've taken from me
till all that's left is part of me
the part of me you don't see
the hidden face of insanity

And even when I think you're gone
you're always lurking, always strong
I feel your shadow over me
your morbid delight in controlling me

You've taken over my heart and soul
I try to resist but I'm too cold
I'm screaming in torment it's too much to bear
I've plummeted into the depths of despair

No one can hear me, I'm too far down
somebody help me i'm going to drown
will this be the end of me?
or can I somehow still be free?

I try to breathe, to get ahold
of my thoughts that are untold
but you have too strong a hold
and all i feel is bitter cold





Poetry by Maxy
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Written on 2007-03-21 at 11:46

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binesh
Something right from the heart! Artistically, a beauty. But it must have cost you such painful emotions in the making .
2007-05-18


normalil
How very descriptive of this terrible illness. And it IS an illness that can be treated. Don't give up...
This is an excellent poem for your first attempt, and I think it can only help to get your feeling out like this.
Take care, things will get better.
2007-05-16


Janine>K
Excellent work!! Especially for your first poem...

Loved it...

Janine
2007-05-15


Janine>K
Excellent work!! Especially for your first poem...

Loved it...

Janine
2007-05-15