This is a christian poem that i did, jus started writin poetry... pls let me know want u think- positive and/or negative opinion would do. you can msg me
I Try and live a straight life
But always turning left or right
Something I want but not nesscarily need
Just trying to satisfy my constant greed
Then on my knees
Asking God to please forgive me
I know when I going wrong
But I find myself still going on
I know want I am doing
Just need to ask God to help through it
It's a battle between my flesh and my spirit
There is no limit
But I know I want my spirit to win it
When I eventually cross the line
I hope I haven't ran out of time
But hopefully be fine
Cause I don't want to be left behind
Poetry by mystry G
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Written on 2007-03-22 at 01:14
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The battle inside
THE BATTLE INSIDEI Try and live a straight life
But always turning left or right
Something I want but not nesscarily need
Just trying to satisfy my constant greed
Then on my knees
Asking God to please forgive me
I know when I going wrong
But I find myself still going on
I know want I am doing
Just need to ask God to help through it
It's a battle between my flesh and my spirit
There is no limit
But I know I want my spirit to win it
When I eventually cross the line
I hope I haven't ran out of time
But hopefully be fine
Cause I don't want to be left behind
Poetry by mystry G
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Written on 2007-03-22 at 01:14
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