Just a little poem i wrote coz i got bored one day.. Nothing special..=P


*Love..*

I didn't know how lucky I was to have you,
Now I've lost you,
And I don't know what to do.
I thought it would last, I thought it was real,
But you pushed me away,
And now I can't take all the pain that I feel.
I've always loved you, and I love you still,
No matter what, I always will.
I feel so lost without you,
You made my day a blest.
I just can't forget you,
Cause you are the very best! ...



Poetry by Cecilie
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Written on 2005-11-09 at 15:09

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Brenna
Hmmm....I can see theres someone who you were dating at one point but you aren't anymore but you still care about them as a person. Thats good to keep it like that. This did seem a bit cliche though. So maybe work on getting better details or something like that.

Brenna
2005-11-10