Annoying Telephone Frustration[Tanka]



It is annoying
When the telephone cuts out
Unexpectedly

When our goodbyes are unsaid
Frustration begins to rise.

25/03/07



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-03-26 at 05:18

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betsy Firefly
This is SO true! Annoying doesn't even cut it!
2007-03-30


kid
This tanka though short has very important and vast meaning. I agree with the last two sentences
2007-03-28


Terry Gresham
This is my life story.
2007-03-27


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
hm yeah... the joys of technology at times eh... frustration is on the mark for sure... not fun being cut short in any occasion, even less by a machine i say lol :) well expressed... *hugs* xx
2007-03-26


nature
very true MY FRIEND
2007-03-26


Zachary P. B.
too true. when i speak to foreign friends, it happens a lot. you are quite expressive in such a short poem, good job.

z.
2007-03-26


Kathy Lockhart
clever tanka Liz. love it. :)
2007-03-26