To my poetess friend, Blue Lady, who enjoys using the old English pronouns in her poetry, as do I!


To Blue Lady



Thy beauty shines forth through the mist
and casts bright light here in our realm.
Please come with me and magic find
where faeries do direct the helm.

Enchanted waters sparkle, bright
and shimmer sweetly on this night.
Bless us with thy grace unending...
Thou art beauty, fine love blending.

All enchanted creatures, singing,
gifts to thee their powers bringing!
Songs flow and fill the night with bliss
as each dear faery, thee doth kiss!




Poetry by Lavender
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Written on 2007-03-29 at 17:22

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yoonoos peerbocus
your poem is ....wow
2007-04-01


Kathy Lockhart
This is a beautiful poem that just flows across the page like sweet cream. I love it.
2007-03-30


ardent.March
This is so beautiful, I enjoy the old pronouns in this poem!
You write poetry that suits them. This has beautiful imagery in every stanza! :) Flow and rhyme excellent as always:)
2007-03-29


Individuality
ah well you know my thoughts on this topic lol but as you know i ahve a couple written using the old words, done for contests of the past :) wings flap poetry from a time before, a breeze of verse flies through the door :)
2007-03-29


Rob Graber
Wow, the metrical shifts, first in lines 7-10, from iambic to trochaic tetrameter, then back again for 11-12, lend this apparently simple poem an unexpected and wonderful subtlety of texture (to my ear anyway). Guess that's how it is when faeries are in charge... :-,?
2007-03-29


salem
so beautiful one
thanx
2007-03-29