How Bitter Sweet.

How bitter sweet these words become
As whispers in the wind
That travel through both time and space
A lovers ear to find
Tis but a tear, No dry eye found
A torment to the heart
That disappears among the stars
As souls now torn apart
How savage is the pain within
That burns without relent
That feeds upon a broken heart
Until its appetite is spent.



Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2007-03-30 at 13:41

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Pamela A Lamppa
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
It truly is a bittersweet, the pleaure and the pain
of love. Wonderful write. ~Pamela
2007-03-31


Kathy Lockhart
i was so entranced by these words that i forgot to breathe until the end. And then, "oooooooooh." Such beauty in rhyme, rhythm, and thought so wonderfully expressed.
2007-03-30