Second Chapter, First Verse


Before you there was time
and I walked the earth alone

And then there was light
as you opened up my eyes





Words by DanDare
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Written on 2005-11-15 at 01:13

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Inked.
There are one-thousand things said here in 22 words...

Beautiful.
2005-12-16


penfold18
In a word beautiful, a simple statement that says it all, well done.
2005-11-15


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Ah - the birth of something new - the birth to stop loneliness.

This screams with joyous creativity. Very good write - it is powerful within those four lines...
2005-11-15