a Emelén \ Lourdes lyric co-write


The Rainbow of Her Reasons



Time
Held between the waiting
Ending only   where your memory begins


Running faster than she ever thought she could
All out of breath      with her heart undone
Inside these beats she might hide out for good
Now find her
Breathe her
Open her
Water her           for don´t you know


Only space can grow
Fading into something larger


Held between the waiting
Ending only where your memory begins
Rescued    in the smallest grains of sandsleep


Rescued in that buried alive       in
Eulogies and never spoken apologies
All that unsaid and undone        she knows
Something lost  may not always be gone
Once broken can someday be restored
Nesting inside her   is something beginning
Slowly emerging from where a memory ends






Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2007-04-20 at 12:06

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katiiieanne
Very nice poem it really opens my mind to my own feelings and why I hold on to certain things...it's very well written and easy to read!

*thumbs up!!*
*bookmarked of course*

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2007-06-10


amandeep
it is very nice poem, amzing,
beyond the thinking

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2007-04-20


Zoya Zaidi
As usaul, my dear Laurdes, you are really eloquent!

"Time
Held between the waiting
Ending only where your memory begins"

From the begining these lines grab your attention never letting it go...

(((Big Fond Welcome Back Hugs)))
Love, your friend, Zoya

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dear Lourdes, this is not the first time and i bet it won't be the last time i remain in awe in front of your art! beautiful! and bookmarked!

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Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
This is absolutely wonderful and an instant bookmark for me - I was in suspense as I read this poem - it kept me enthralled all the way, and when I finished reading it, I had to read it again.

Elle x

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2007-04-20