What an amazingly insightful poem. So that is what we all do, and have to do. It's human nature, I've seen it happen sometimes to a ridiculous extreme. Very very good, "Roby, darling," lol :)
2014-02-27

Michelle Panter
Read it.. I liked it
Read it again.. liked it even more

No I don't

In fact.. I absolutely love it!!

Well done :-)
2007-05-14

Marte Natalie
I like it ;)

-MN
2007-05-08

Amanda K
well done.romantic one
2007-05-07

Peter J. Kautsky
insightful, helpful, wish I held on to this deal when I had it.
2007-05-07

Gopi
Something that happens without even trying must be pure I guess.
2007-05-06

Zachary P. B.
i like it, i like it alot. brilliant write on romance, rob.
2007-05-05

Zoya Zaidi
She makes him like her
He makes her like him
They become like each other
They are like each other
They were already a lot like each other
They are each other...

Round and round
The vicious circle goes on...

I feel as if you are talking to me...

'Are you talking to me?'

lol!


I like the without even trying refrain!


I really enjoyed this Roby darling!

(((Hugs)))
Love, Zoya
2007-05-04

M Heathcote
I like the way it starts to repeat
As though the one left out of the triangle
Is going slightly mad or neurotic
Trying to make it circular again
2007-05-03

la tristesse
this reminds me of a fact i learnt recently about angler fish, after they mate the female absorbs the male into her body and he actually becomes her on a molecular level. art reflects nature, eh? i suppose we are all emotionally canabalistic after a while. either that or you don't stay together.
2007-05-02

penfold18
What a great play on words, so well put together.
2007-05-01

Kathy Lockhart
i love the twist and turns of words revealing more and more meaning in each line.
2007-04-30

Esti D-G
Well crafted and very amusing little sonnet, Bob!
2007-04-30

F.i.in.e Moods
:D oh really love the twists here... wonderful! playful flow for me with the way this is written... :) *hugs* xx
2007-04-30

I loved this Rob, a great play with words, and you are right, they do become and like eachother!

Smiling at you,

Tai
2007-04-30

very cleverly expressed!
2007-04-29

Elle
a book mark!

Elle x
2007-04-29

mmm...interesting twist of words...:)..."without even trying"...as kath said, i loved it! and bookmarked it!
Lilly xxx
2007-04-29

kath
..there is a softness carried in every word of your poem... I loved it ...
2007-04-29