More Then What I Can

What words can I use
to express how I feel?
How can I bridge this distance,
do things that prove my love is real?
The obvious that I can state
and on the phone I have told you that
I love you and only with you is the life I wish to make.
Yet sometimes, I feel telling you isn't enough
I want to prove that I, and my words, are real
but the distance makes physically proving tough.
I think with only just my words you do really understand
that you are the only one who has my heart
but I wish I could do more then at the moment only what I can.

22/03/07



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-05-06 at 06:55

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sabereh lotfian
a very flowing bright piece with beautiful soft emotions running through!I specially loved the way you started the poem :
What words can I use
to express how I feel?
Such a beautiful heart you have

Hope all the best
Sabereh
2007-07-16


Coolaaron88
Liz I havent talked to you in forever, I loved this one, good Job. : )

~Aaron Rowe
2007-06-06


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
having a long distance relationship myself, I can understand what you say - this medium is powerful but it is to pick up every nuance, sometimes not always as positively as you would wish.

Elle x
2007-05-07


nature
its lovely my friend
2007-05-07


Hagzissa
Beautifully written
2007-05-06


Rob Graber
Thoughtful expression of the limitations of e-lationships...
2007-05-06


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Elizabeth hey this is a lovely story for him and he is going to be so relieved
beautiful love letter for the guy
and nice to see you back
lolol rgds mike
2007-05-06