a sequal to Grounds for divorce 22 years on


Moving On by M.A.Meddings

Moving on.

By M.A.Meddings.


All the long and the lonely tears,
That I cried for you,
Were so bitter as they fell,
But now? I'm moving on.

No matter now your written vowed regret,
That it 'should have to end like this'
Just your ghost to exorcise,
For now? I'm moving on.

One score years and two of blind recall,
And thank you, for the memory,
The hurt has gone,
And now ? I'm moving on







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Written on 2005-11-20 at 08:27

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kath
.. I can feel the hurt behind the "moving on" ...thank you ---

regards kath
2007-01-30


blackestdaze
grounds for divorce. the ol' i was right and you were wrong, is anything ever so simple???? methinks, NO. if two people split up, it is the failing of both.

but that, my dear, is an opinion on the content and not the text. so, i'll try harder.

there is apparent hurt here. the last two lines rhyming made it feel finished, so they had a good effect. there is honesty here, it feels like a heart splayed out. all in all, a fine poem.

love is humanity's greatest strength, and simultaneously humanity's greatest weakness.
2005-11-20


Zoya Zaidi
A LOVELY POSITIVE REALISTIC PIECE! Thanks, MEDDINGS for moving on,
We all must realise, we have to do that one day... sooner better then later...?
A must read!
2005-11-20