missing her


Wild river by M.A.Meddings

Wild river Atrans down to the sea
Much too cold for the likes of me
But here I am alone and just wishing
You were here
But what of the fishing
Well feeling like this at my age
It can wait until tommorrow
Wild deep love flowing like a river



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Written on 2007-05-17 at 15:40

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Amanda K
yeah love does flow like river but with no ends

just lovely micky mouse
2007-05-18


kath
.....love is such a strong force ......... and in your poem you make this clear ... every detail in our world when we are in love, is focused on the one we love ..... it is a state of bliss ... and in a strange way also filled with sorrow ... or rather when in love every sense in a persons body and soul is enhanced ....

best wishes
kath
2007-05-17


Elle The PoetBay support member heart!
Wild deep love flowing like a river

That is so beautiful Michael - She is a lucky lady - well you are both lucky people to have found a love like this :)

Elle x
2007-05-17


Kathy Lockhart
Your words flowing have left my heart knowing your love for me.
And in this deep river, my heart continues to quiver with my love for thee. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxyb
2007-05-17



A beautiful and heartfelt reflection, this little poem is just like a postcard to your beloved one, hero!

(The Ätran river...
I remember analyzing a sample of water from the Ätran once, when I still thought that my future lay in the study of water and sewage systems. It was nice and quite clean. This has, of course, nothing to do with your poem, but it is just a memory that popped up reading the river's name... Sorry for this un-romantic parenthesis! 8-])
2007-05-17


penfold18
Elequently put Micheal and I should imagine she is feeling the same, best wishes my freind.
2007-05-17