Because i'm tired, and just watched jurasic park and it popped into my head.


Forever Amber

Forever amber is my shrine
Sealed in sap for endless time
Carried on the winds and tide
A spectacle of how i died

My body ridgid to the core
Enclosed in amber forever more
Down through the ages, still i'm here
Untouched by man or atmosphere

To roam the sea along with sand
Once more i'm cast upon the land
Amid the flotsam of some wreck
A trinket for some pretty neck.



Poetry by penfold18
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Written on 2005-11-21 at 00:24

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BlueyedSoul
Excellent write. Beautifully penned.
I love the title and every word...and the last line puts it into another perspective...

Amid the flotsam of some wreck
A trinket for some pretty neck.

Awesome.

~BlueyedSoul
2005-11-22


Bobbie
BEAUTIFUL
2005-11-22


MadinSane
i just love this title..
love it!
2005-11-21


Black Knight
Another good piece of poetry...
Excellent.
2005-11-21


John Ashleigh The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful and very hopefull. Not much I can say! Heh...
2005-11-21


Zoya Zaidi
Wow! Pen, What an idea!
And how beautifully put!
I am in awe!
Pen, you pen is like a molten liquid fire, no, honey, no, lava...(I DON'T KNOW HOW TO SAY) these days...
(((Warm HUgs)))
xxx,Zoya
2005-11-21


Albert
A really good read it brings to my minds eye those creatures trapped, as they were millions of years ago.
2005-11-21


blackestdaze
until you get cloned, that is... yaaaay, there is life after amber ;)

i like jurassic park, good movie....

deep thoughts here... kind of makes you think of the impersonal-ness of it all... makes me think of that "death museum" where they've got corpse art on display... whew it's freaky.

good writing, and it's good as a stand-alone without the jurassic park mentioned in the author notes. but it was nice to have insight into the writing process :)
2005-11-21